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commision for AzureHowlShilach Hope you like it~ 
Sonoke standing in the water and have cought a fish that doesnt seem to want to stay in her mouth ^^ 

3/8 ':D
Character(C) AzureHowlShilach
Art(C) BlackBloodX
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I hope you don't mind me commenting!

Now let me start off by saying that I adore the setting; the sun combined with the brilliant blue of the water really gives the piece a colorful vibe. I also really like the reflection of the water!

Your anatomy is actually very good; there are really only two or three minor things I noticed that could maybe use a little work! One of these things was the rear leg closest to the viewer; the knee seems a little short, and the hock (bone that sticks out on the back of the leg) should be a bit lower, same goes for the other back leg!

The facial anatomy is very well done! You placed the eyes perfectly in proportion to the nose; well done!! One tiny thing I noticed was that the ears were a bit too high. Really, all that needs to be done for this is just bringing the ears in and down a bit.

Over all, wonderful piece! I adore the tail, especially! Keep up the good work; I'd love to see your future works!!